This is a stripped down render from one of the cameras in my animation so I can get a feel for how it's progressing. The overall pacing looks pretty good, I still need to have more animation of the two drills in action on the rifle and I'm going to include some Minority Report style graphic interface on the assembly line. I reckon the final edit will make or break it, made up from up to ten (maybe more?) different cameras and I'll need a render farm to deal with that. The devil is in the detail now. Looking good though...